DA script cho changes1-2

Changes
- Andrew Foster to Tim Leegstra
- Added" Communications Officer
Scene 4
- Richardson: "encounter with Y'nok." to "encounter with planet Y'nok."
Added: Scene 5B
- Standard Batavia shot
Scene 6
- Richardson: "That obvious, huh." to "Is it really that obvious..."
- Richardson: "I want to talk to you about Y'nok." to "I want to talk to you about planet Y'nok."
- Richardson: "it's a complete mess out there." to "it's a complete disaster out there."
- Knapp: "from a Federation colony near Y'nok" to "from a Federation colony near planet Y'nok"
Scene 10
- Com Officer: "incoming transmission from Y'nok." to "incoming transmission from planet Y'nok."
- Knapp: "put an end to this right now." to "put an end to this right now, I promise you."
Scene 12
- Knapp: "managed to counter the bio agent." to "managed to counter the effects of the biological agent."
Scene 14
- Richardson: "What's this?" to "What's happening?"
- Richardson: "Red Alert! Shuttle, huh." to "Go to Red Alert! Really, a shuttlecraft."
- Richardson: "Stand down or we'll blow you to pieces!" to "Please stand down while you still can."
- Katina: "No response, sir." to Communications Officer: "I'm not getting a response, sir."
- Richardson: "disable their weapons" to "I want you to disable their weapons"
Scene 18
- Richardson: "Not the nacelle... Warp Drive?" to "Not that nacelle again... do we still have Warp Drive?"
- Katina: "Disabled, sir" to "Our Warp Drive is disabled, sir."
Added: Scene 23B
- Standard Batavia shot