DA script nf changes6-0

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  • Scene 8
    • Richardson: "It’s been a while since we’ve been to Ethernita, so that’s an option. Or we could go to a place called Cententa III, not that far from here" -to- "You’ll find out soon enough."
  • NEW scene 9
    • All scene numbers after 9 are +1
  • INT, BATAVIA, CORRIDOR
    • Katina is standing just outside Richardson’s Ready Room. Belissa walks by.
      • BELISSA
        • And? Did he tell you?
      • KATINA
        • He says he STILL hasn’t made up his mind.
      • BELISSA
        • You’re the Chief of Security, right?
      • KATINA
        • Uhuh.
      • BELISSA
        • Can’t you check out his log... for security reasons of course...
      • KATINA
        • An internal investigation?
      • RICHARDSON(VOICE)
        • I can hear you, you know.
    • Katina and Belissa start whispering.
      • BELISSA
        • It’s not like we’re the only ones who want to know where we’re going.
      • KATINA
        • But you’re forgetting rule number 1.
      • BELISSA
        • Rule number 1?
      • KATINA
        • Don’t mess with the Captain.
    • They smile and walk out.
  • NEW Scene 29
    • Numbers were wrong, Scene 29 is now INT, BATAVIA, MAIN BRIDGE
    • All scene numbers after 29 are +1
  • DELETED Scene 32
    • Numbers were wrong, Scene 32 is now INT, BLUE STAR, MAIN BRIDGE
    • All scene numbers after 32 are -1
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