DA script cht changes1-1

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• Characters:
  • deleted: Computer Voice

• Scene 2
  • deleted: Richardson taps his badge.
  • altered: Combadge convo is now a screen convo.

• Scene 5
  • on the floor -to- in the back.

• Scene 6
  • added: to escape the explosion.

• Scene 7
  • altered: The colonist holds a phaser pistol pointed at Belissa.

• Scene 10, 11 and 12
  • altered: scene layout, this is now mostly seen from the shuttle with the Batavia bridge on a screen.
  • hands tied to their backs -to- hands tied in front.
  • Richardson: "Katina" -to- "Celissia"
  • transporter device is now around Belissa's wrist.

• Scene 14
  • altered: Richardson sits on his couch before Katina walks in.
  • added: Richardson: ",have a seat"

• Scene 16
  • Katina nods -to- Katina smiles.

• Scene 19
  • fireworks -to- smoke
  • added: Vasiliev gets up.
  • added: Vasiliev walks out.

• Scene 22
  • Vasiliev: "EPS conduit" -to- "plasma conduits".

• Scene 25
  • Richardson: "the man who captured you're officers" -to- "the kidnapper".